FOR HER -"PLACE"


THE PLACE WHERE WE MET
WHERE WE EXCHANGED HEARTS

THE PLACE WHERE WE FELT
WHERE WE DECIDED TO START.

THE PLACE SO MUCH MEANT
IS THE PLACE WHERE WE WALKED APART.

THE PLACE SO LONELY NOW
IS THE PLACE WHERE I DECIDED TO END MYSELF NOW.




WRITTEN FOR ONE SINGLE IMPRESSION PROMPT -  "PLACE"
ONE SINGLE IMPRESSION

Comments

  1. very touching and beautiful! :)

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  2. The memory of that special place--whether it be in space or time--can be a source of great pain. You've said that quite well in this piece. Powerful.

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  3. So much pain in this, powerful writing and lovely flow

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  4. Sometimes, the one place may mark the end of a start. But perhaps another landmark might be the beginning of a new chapter.
    Thanks for your thoughts :)

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  5. Lovely poem, not too keen on the capital letters though, but I can absolutely life with that for something this beautiful! Thanks for sharing! *smile*

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  6. ohmygoodness. i felt giddy reading this. :)

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